PRESENTATION

FEEDBACK EXCERCISE

For our presentation we had to present in groups of 8, for 5 minuets with, 1 minute to analyse and give/receive feedback. After receiving our feedback we then did and exercise in categorising what was beneficial to use in progressing with our designs.


Feedback that was positive.

• Loved how visual the presentation was
• Very focused on what you want to go into - specific + thorough
• Wide variety of designs researched
• Clear, concise and confident
• I like the link between your research and own work.
• Broad range of research that will benefit when looking at layout/ composition 
• Through research on media and different style/ eras
• Good work for including action plan for this year.

Feedback that was specific

• Focus on photography
• Include designers more than different magazines
• Practice doing more digital editorials so you can become an expert

Feedback that could have been more critical 

• Abundance on information 
• Great example of personal experience
• Interest aided by placement in summer in chosen topic
• Clear interest in topic and points to improve on in future
• A lot of research well though out
• Large amount of research into a number of magazines
• Different magazine covers were interesting, e.g negative space idea
• Lots of visual research
• Could involve different aspects from each era of magazine design/ countries styles

We also then looked at how to give, informative and summative feedback and that in order to receive / give this we need to use a more specific and extensive use of vocabulary so that it is clear and concise. Even though we was given a small time frame it's important to execute this in a small amount of time.

Feedback objectives

From this we then had to select 3 objectives from the feedback we received to consider in improving our brief.

1. Include designers names / studios more than the names of magazines
2. Look more into digital design practices / layout and composition 
3. Look at specific mediums in deisgn, e.g photography & illustration.